Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1題，滿分15分）

下周班會(huì)，英語老師要求每個(gè)同學(xué)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，分享一下學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。你可以談?wù)剬?duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)、你的學(xué)習(xí)方法以及你的要求和建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示詞寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

提示詞：important, useful, improve, listen, practice

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone! I think English is widely used and useful in the world. It’s important for us to learn it well.

I am interested in English. But at the beginning, I was weak in it. With the help of my teacher and classmates, I have made great progress. I did a lot to improve my English. First, I listened to my teacher carefully at class and made some notes so that I could review my lessons after class. Second, I practiced listening and speaking a lot. I was not afraid of making mistakes. I also tried to read more English magazines and stories.

I hope my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us. I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class.

Then I’m sure we will make great progress in learning English.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如I did a lot to improve my English. practiced listening and speaking a lot.等，But at the beginning,等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。