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【題目】李雷和他的同學(xué)要到圓山去春游。因為春天是爬山的最好時候。天氣好，即不會太冷也不會太熱。李雷和他的同學(xué)騎自行車去圓山，結(jié)果在路上，李雷拐錯了彎，發(fā)生了交通事故，傷到了右腿。所以說遵守交通規(guī)則對于我們來說非常重要。 我們平時必須遵守 交通規(guī)則。 1. 注意交通燈。紅燈停,綠燈行。 2.不要騎得太快，應(yīng)該靠右邊行。3. 騎車要小心，戴頭盔。 4. 不能違反交通規(guī)則， 否則會被罰款。
提示詞: make a wrong turn , happen, traffic light, helmets, break, get a fine
要求：1語言通順，意思連貫 2. 70個詞左右
We should obey the traffic rules

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

How to obey the traffic rules

Li Lei and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Yuan for the spring field trip.

Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine. It's not too cold and not too hot. Li Lei and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Lei made a wrong turn, and a traffic accident happened. Li Lei's right leg was hurt. (His classmates had to send him to the hospital.) So it's very important for us to obey the traffic rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn't ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third, we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffic rules, we'll get a fine.

【解析】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給的材料，描述李雷和同學(xué)一起去爬山的經(jīng)歷。通過分析可知，文章中記敘爬山的事情以及路上發(fā)生的事情時，因為是已經(jīng)發(fā)生過的，故應(yīng)使用一般過去時態(tài)，注意動詞的形式變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。從這件事上得到的教訓(xùn)應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作的時候，要注意英語表達(dá)跟漢語的不同，使用一些詞匯、短語和句型，從整體考慮。句子之間使用一些連詞，或者使用一些從句，如時間狀語從句或條件狀語從句等，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。