Question

4．健康是一個(gè)重要話題．健康的身心，能使我們和諧相處、愉快學(xué)習(xí)．為此，學(xué)校英語廣播站舉行"健康成長"征文比賽活動(dòng)． 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要求寫一篇80詞以上的短文． 內(nèi)容要求健康重要；
2．如何做到身心健康（飲食、起居、運(yùn)動(dòng)、溝通）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是圍繞健康的重要性及獲得健康的途徑展開作文．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．健康重要；
2．如何做到身心健康（飲食、起居、運(yùn)動(dòng)、溝通）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
try one's best to do sth盡某人最大的努力做某事
First of all…Secondly…首先，第二
instead of而不是
at least 至少
besides除了
get along with sb與某人相處
play a part扮演一個(gè)角色
communicate with  sb與某人交流
高分句型：
Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music．
本句是一個(gè)祈使句，是and連接的兩個(gè)并列句，表示提出建議．a(chǎn)t least至少，by doing sth表示通過某種方式作方式狀語．
Besides the physical health，we also need friendship．
besides是介詞，表示除…之外（還有），本句承上啟下．

解答 Growing Up Healthily!
Growing up healthily is our duty．Every one of us should try our best to keep ourselves healthy．（健康重要）
First of all，keep a balanced diet．We should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day．Don't eat junk food．Drink water instead of cola（飲食）．
Secondly，get enough sleep and enough exercise．Early to bed and early to rise help a lot to our health． Try to sleep eight or nine hours every night．Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music．（高分句型）（起居和運(yùn)動(dòng)）
Besides the physical health，we also need friendship．（高分句型）We should try to get along well with people around us．We can share our problems and happiness with them．And we should often communicate with our parents and teachers．Communication plays an important part in our life．（溝通）
A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily．（總結(jié)概括全文）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．