Question

【題目】書面表達。

假如你們班明天下午召開一次關(guān)于英語學(xué)習方法交流的班會。請你以How do I learn English?為話題，在下面的提示基礎(chǔ)上寫一篇簡短的發(fā)言稿，可以自己適當添加內(nèi)容。要求:1. 80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

提示：1. 加入英語俱樂部 ； 2. 常去英語角； 3. 每天早晨早起記單詞； 4. 常做聽力練習； 5. 收看英語節(jié)目。 6.其他方法……

Good afternoon, everyone!

It’s an honor to talk with all of you here.

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Good afternoon, everyone!

It’s an honor to talk with all of you here. I want to give you some advice on how to learn English well. In order to improve my English, I joined an English club. And I often go to the English corner and talk with others in English. I usually remember new words as soon as I get up every morning. I often follow the tapes to do some listening practice. In my spare time, I often watch some English programs on TV. I have made some progress this term, and do you want to have a try?

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇如何學(xué)好英語的發(fā)言稿。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： I want to....；In order to...；as soon as ...；I often ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意發(fā)言稿的格式。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了想要給大家一些學(xué)好英語的建議；接下來自己學(xué)好英語的方法：加入英語俱樂部，常去英語角，每天早晨早起記單詞，常做聽力練習，收看英語節(jié)目；最后希望大家去試一試自己的方法。此處talk with, give sb some advice, get up, in one’s spare time, make some progress等這些詞組的運用以及時間狀語從句 as soon as I get up every morning.的運用也讓文章增色不少。