Question

學(xué)期即將結(jié)束，Li Lei收到一封來自英國筆友Jerry的e-mail，Jerry想邀請他參加北京五日游的活動，可是Li Lei已以制定了自己的寒假計劃，不能前往。請根據(jù)Li Lei的寒假計劃幫他寫一封回信。

注意：1.表格內(nèi)容全部涉及，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和班級；

3. 詞數(shù)約80詞，開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Study	Practice English, take guitar lessons
Sports	Exercise more...
Housework	Make the bed...
Travel	Hangzhou, parents, car, two days
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Hi Jerry,

Thanks a lot for your invitation. I'm sorry I can't go to Beijing with you. I'm really busy in the coming winter holiday.

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Yours,

Li lei

 

Answer 1

Hi Jerry,

Thanks a lot for your invitation. I'm sorry I can't go to Beijing with you. I'm really busy in the coming winter holiday.

In the morning,I’ll practice my English so that Ican get good results next term.Then I’ll run or play basketball in the park because I’ll exercise more than before.

In the afternoon, I’ll take guitar lessons because my parents want me to do well in music. I’ll make the bed, clean the room and help my father water the flowers in the garden.

My parents and I are going to Hangzhou by car for two days. I think we’ll have a good time there. Do you think so ?

Yours,

Li lei

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進(jìn)行恰當(dāng)?shù)恼�合，更能加�?qiáng)作品的可讀性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。