Question

【題目】

要求：

1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)拓展，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名。

Dear Tony,

I am glad that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. As we know, good habits can make our lives better.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

I am glad that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. As we know, good habits can make our lives better. Firstly, we should go to bed and get up early. Don’t stay up too late at night. Enough sleep is good for our health. Secondly, we should have healthy eating habits. Life should be regular. We shouldn’t go to school without breakfast .We had better eat more fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat junk food. Thirdly, exercising is helpful to keep healthy. It is necessary for us to exercise at least twice a week. Finally, we must say no to smoking and drinking. In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下“好習(xí)慣塑造好生活”。所提供的材料中列舉了飲食習(xí)慣、生活習(xí)慣和其他的一些好習(xí)慣。主要介紹你自己對(duì)于這兩者的看法和做法。時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱we來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

I am glad that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. 我很高興你對(duì)我們的“好習(xí)慣，好生活”活動(dòng)感興趣。

句子that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. 是由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。

【高分句型二】

這篇作文使用了很多的祈使句或含情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的句子。例如：（1）Don’t stay up too late at night. （2）Don’t eat junk food. （3）We shouldn’t go to school without breakfast. 豐富了作文的內(nèi)容。

【高分句型三】

It is necessary for us to exercise at least twice a week. 我們必須每周至少鍛煉兩次。

這句話用到了句型：It is+形容詞+for sb. to do sth.