Question

請(qǐng)以“My Best Friend and I”為題，寫一篇短文
要求：    1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。
2.詞數(shù)：60-80
                                                                        
                                                                       

Answer 1

Linda is my best friend. She is 15 years old. She is a pretty girl with a round face and two big black eyes. She always has a smile on her face. She is taller than I.
　　Every morning, we go to school together. She studies quite well and she's a top student in our class. She is modest in her behaviour. When I have difficulty in English, I always ask her for help. We are both interested in music. At weekends, we join the same hobby group and play the violin together.
We like each other.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，題目是My Best Friend and I, 對(duì)內(nèi)容沒有其他的限制。在寫作時(shí)就要緊扣標(biāo)題，寫是的我的最好的朋友和我，在作文中兩者都要有所體現(xiàn)。另外，從題目中可以看出，文章要用第一人稱，并用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
這篇文章內(nèi)容緊扣標(biāo)題，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，內(nèi)容緊湊，第一段介紹朋友，第二段些我和朋友的關(guān)系到最后的總結(jié)。文中運(yùn)用了很多學(xué)過(guò)的短語(yǔ)，例如with a round face and...,have difficulty in, ask her for help, be interested in， at weekend等，為文章增色不少，。另外用到了學(xué)過(guò)的形容詞比較級(jí)，能學(xué)以致用。