Question

19．親愛的同學(xué)們，課余時(shí)間、周末、假期，你們通常都是怎樣度過的呢？請(qǐng)以"My Free Time"為題，寫一篇短文．
信息提示：
（1）參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體；
（2）娛樂活動(dòng)，放松心情；
（3）做家務(wù)，幫助父母；
（4）課外閱讀，開拓視野．
要點(diǎn)：
（1）根據(jù)信息提示，把握要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不逐字翻譯．
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名或校名．
（3）詞數(shù)為80-100．文章的開頭已給出，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
My Free Time
I have lots of things to do in my free time．Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better．Sometimes I listen to the music for a while，which is a good way to relax myself．Of course，I help my parents with the housew ork at the weekends too．When I get tired，I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel，a science fiction，or even a poem．Reading calms my heart down and satisfies my hunger for knowledge．
I love my free time because I enjoy the freedom．．

Answer 1

分析 此篇書面表達(dá)的話題是以日常生活為背景的，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行描述．內(nèi)容包括：參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體；娛樂活動(dòng)，放松心情；做家務(wù)，幫助父母；課外閱讀，開拓視野．既有實(shí)際行動(dòng)，又有行動(dòng)的目的，兩者缺一不可才能使敘述有邏輯性．在敘述過程中可以對(duì)一些具體的事例加以說明，使文章描述更完整．

解答 My Free Time
I have lots of things to do in my free time．
Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better．Sometimes I listen to the music for a while，which is a good way to relax myself．Of course，I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too．When I get tired，I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel，a science fiction，or even a poem．Reading calms my heart down and satisfies my hunger for knowledge．
I love my free time because I enjoy the freedom．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 建議學(xué)生完成書面表達(dá)時(shí)：要注意切題，不寫沒有把握的句子，切忌為使文章生動(dòng)，在句中隨意增加自己無把握的詞，導(dǎo)致中文式英語(yǔ)而影響考試成績(jī)．盡量用自己熟悉的句型和詞匯來表達(dá)完整的意思就可以了．