Question

【題目】今年我市深入開(kāi)展了“學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒精神，共創(chuàng)文明城區(qū)”的活動(dòng)。在3月5日學(xué)雷鋒紀(jì)念日這天，你校組織志愿者去諸暨敬老院開(kāi)展“學(xué)雷鋒，送溫暖”活動(dòng)。假如你是張華，請(qǐng)你發(fā)一封郵件將活動(dòng)情況介紹給美國(guó)的朋友Ben, 與他分享你的美好的經(jīng)歷。

活動(dòng)時(shí)間	3月5日
活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)	諸暨敬老院 （Zhuji Old People's Home）
參加人員	學(xué)校志愿者
活動(dòng)形式	送去鮮花和水果；幫助打掃衛(wèi)生；陪老人聊天、唱歌、跳舞；送去美好祝愿
活動(dòng)感想	關(guān)愛(ài)老人（the elder people, 尊重老人

要求：1). 短文應(yīng)包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2). 文章80個(gè)詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Ben,
Thank you for your last e—mail. Let me tell you what we did on March 5th in our school.
If you have the chance to come to China, I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ben,

Thank you for your last e—mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.

As soon as we volunteer got to Zhuji Ola People's Home, they gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elder people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were! After that, we sat together chatting with them and gave our best wishes to them. The elder people were very excited. When it was time for us to leave, they were grateful for our kindness. But I felt it our duty to care for the elder people and respect them.

If you have the chance to come to China, I hope you can join us.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【解析】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體應(yīng)為記敘文、人稱(chēng)采用第一人稱(chēng)為主和時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)要包括全。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，如 as soon as，then，after，but，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。