Question

你是學(xué)校英文報(bào)的小記者李華。請(qǐng)給你校初三學(xué)生寫(xiě)一封公開(kāi)信，就如何保持考前健康提出建議。主要內(nèi)容如下：

(1)早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；

(2)飲食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；

(3)多做體育運(yùn)動(dòng)；

(4)你的其它建議。

Dear students，

As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to…

Best wishes and stay healthy．

Yours，

Li Hua

注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右(信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù))；

2．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear students，

As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to tell you how to keep healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

Best wishes and stay healthy．

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫(xiě)一篇如何保持考前健康的公開(kāi)信。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)。寫(xiě)作中注意將所給要點(diǎn)介紹清楚，并提出自己的建議。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行敘述，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問(wèn)題及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。

考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿(mǎn)意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。