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4．近日，《中國健康月刊》對全國1306 名15 歲以下學生進行了調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)40.74%的孩子有齲齒．為此，在全國牙齒關愛日到來前，請你根據(jù)以下要點，結(jié)合自己的體會，給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文，談談如何保護牙齒．
1．每天早晚刷牙；
2．有蛀牙及早看醫(yī)生；
3．有齙牙可戴牙套；
4．健康飲食（蔬菜、水果…）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80 詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．應覆蓋所有要點；可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；3．參考詞匯：tooth decay 蛀牙；crooked teeth 齙牙； braces n．牙套．
Teeth problems are common among children．A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1，306Chinese students under age 15had decayed teeth．Teeth problems are common among children．A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1，306 Chinese students under age 15 had decayed teeth．Here are some ways to project your teeth．First，it's really necessary for you to brush your teeth twice a day at least-morning and night．Second，if you have tooth decay，you should go to the doctor's for help as soon as possible．Third，using braces is a wise choice if your teeth arc crooked．Finally，try to have a healthy diet taking more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food．In a word，if you care much about tooth health，you'll be better from tooth problems．．

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分析 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．

解答 Teeth problems are common among children．A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1，306 Chinese students under age 15 had decayed teeth．Here are some ways to project your teeth．First，it's really necessary for you to brush your teeth twice a day at least-morning and night．Second，if you have tooth decay，you should go to the doctor's for help as soon as possible．Third，using braces is a wise choice if your teeth arc crooked．Finally，try to have a healthy diet taking more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food．In a word，if you care much about tooth health，you'll be better from tooth problems．

點評 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．如：強調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對某人來說怎么樣；as soon as一…就…；等．序數(shù)詞first等的使用是本文看起來更加條理清楚，符合邏輯關系．學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，讓文章更出彩．