Question

【題目】書面表達

Tony是我的筆友，他來自澳大利亞，現居住上海。今年14歲。他喜歡中國食物和熊貓，音樂和足球是他的最愛。他喜歡和別人交談，并且喜歡交朋友，他想在中國當一名記者。今天是周六，天氣晴朗，他正在和朋友們在公園玩。

請根據以上的信息，寫一篇以My pen pal 為題不少于60字左右的短文（關鍵詞已給出）

Australia, Shanghai, music, soccer, Chinese food, pandas, reporter, sunny, playing, park

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a pen pal. His name is Tony. He is 14 years old. He is from Australia. Now he lives in Shanghai. He studies in No.12 Middle School. He likes Chinese food and pandas. He thinks that pandas are very cute.

Music and soccer are his favorites. He also likes talking with others and making friends. He wants to be a reporter in China.

On weekends he often likes to play soccer with his friends. Today it is Saturday. It’s sunny. He is playing soccer with his friends in the park.

【解析】

試題分析：短文介紹了筆友Tony的情況，所以句子的主語用第三人稱單數，所以句子的時態(tài)用一般現在時，要注意上下句的銜接，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法。

寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：be from來自；like doing喜歡做某事；make friends交朋友；want to do sth想要做某事；play soccer with sb和某人一起踢足球。用了that引導的賓語從句，增加了文章的亮點。