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10．請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀下面這篇短文，再根據(jù)短文后面的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完成寫作，將短文寫在答題卡指定的位置上． 
This is my favorite school．It starts at 9 a．m．a(chǎn)nd finishes at 3 p．m．We have music and art lessons every day because they are very interesting to us．There are only 25 students in each class．We only have half an hour of homework on weekdays．
There is a park，a shopping mall，a tennis court and a swimming pool．We have a big library with lots of useful books．There are lots of clubs and after-school activities．Every month，we go on a school trip to a museum or a theater．
為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂地成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議．假如你是劉波，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提示，以"Suggestions for a Better School Life"為題，用英語向校長(zhǎng)寫一封80詞左右的建議信．注意：①文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；②語句連貫，不得照搬原文；③不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名；④開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Our school	*open the library more often*organize more after-class activities *give us more time for sports*organize fewer tests
Our teacher	*make classes more interesting*talk less but more clearly in class *finish classes on time*give us less homework

Suggestions for a Better School Life
Dear Headmaster，
I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will_________________________
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                     Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                            Liu Bo．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．
句中"they can talk less but more clearly in class"為"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，句中短語有"be interested in sth 對(duì)…感興趣"．這句話意為：如果他們可以在課堂上說得更簡(jiǎn)單明了，我們會(huì)對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)更感興趣而且有更多的時(shí)間練習(xí)．
高分句型二：
What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
句中"they will give us less homework and finish classes on time"為賓語從句．句中有短語"what's more  再者，而且"、"on time 準(zhǔn)時(shí)"．這句話意為：再者，我希望他們少留點(diǎn)兒作業(yè)，按時(shí)下課．

解答 Dear headmaster，
  I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
  First，I hope our school will open the library more often．Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（對(duì)學(xué)校的建議）
  As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型一】What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型二】（對(duì)老師的建議）
  Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                             liu Bo

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語意通暢．