Question

【題目】現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)低碳生活(low-carbon life)，即低能量、低消耗、低碳排放的生活，它是目前全世界環(huán)保主義者倡導(dǎo)的保護(hù)地球、保護(hù)生存環(huán)境的健康生活方式。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示：1）你的具體做法：步行或者騎自行車上學(xué)；乘公共汽車而不坐私家車；節(jié)約用水等；2）你的感受和建議。
Low-carbon life is good for everyone.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk, take a bus or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Pay attention to saving water at any time. I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life. What's more, the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.

So I suggest we should reuse books as possible as we can. And we'd better not spend much money on expensive clothes.

All in all, if everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.

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