Question

【題目】假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)初三學(xué)生Daniel，寫信給青少年專家Sigmund Friend，告訴他進(jìn)入初三后你的煩惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中信息，完成一封求助信。

要求： 1. 詞數(shù)80左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

2. 要點(diǎn)必須包括表格中的所有信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)義連貫。

個(gè)人信息	15歲，九年級(jí)學(xué)生；
性格特點(diǎn)	勤奮，喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，……；
煩惱	學(xué)習(xí)和興趣之間找不到平衡；
愿望	……

Dear Sigmund Friend,

My name is Daniel. I’m from Sunshine Middle School. ___________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sigmund Friend,

My name is Daniel. I’m from Sunshine Middle School. I am fifteen years old. Now I am a Grade 9 student. I love sports very much because it can bring strength to my body and mind. I am very confident and I am not afraid of making speeches in front of many people.

However, I have some problems now. I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to finish it. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class. I find it hard to achieve a balance between my homework and my hobby.

What should I do? Can you offer me some valuable suggestions? I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes.

Daniel

【解析】本文是以第一人稱敘述自己上初三后的煩惱，所以應(yīng)該用第一人稱單數(shù)，句子時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作時(shí)，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意上下文的銜接，盡量使用自己熟悉的詞匯及句式，確保正確率。同時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)?shù)剡M(jìn)行擴(kuò)展，發(fā)揮想象力，使文章更加的豐富、充實(shí)。