20.在黔南州建州六十周年到來之際,請你以自愿者Li Hua的身份向中外友人宣傳我們的家鄉(xiāng)---黔南,并倡導(dǎo)大家做文明市民,讓家鄉(xiāng)變得更加美麗.
要點提示:
1.介紹你的家鄉(xiāng):①美麗的風(fēng)景;②宜人的氣候;③傳統(tǒng)的工藝;④悠久的茶文化
2.倡導(dǎo):①誠實友善;②樂于助人;③保護環(huán)境,低碳生活;
3.你的希望.
要求:
1.必須用上以上信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.要求句子連貫,語意通順,書寫規(guī)范;
3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞,文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息.
參考詞匯:traditional arts,citizen(市民),low-carbon(低碳)
Hello!My name is Li Hun.I'm a middle school student.Welcome to my hometown---Qiannan.It lies in the south of Guizhou provine.        .
Thank you!

分析 本題是一篇提綱作文,要求根據(jù)有關(guān)提示,介紹黔南,并倡導(dǎo)大家做文明市民,讓家鄉(xiāng)變得更加美麗.根據(jù)提示信息,短文要從"介紹"和"倡導(dǎo)"兩個方面進(jìn)行寫作.短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),主要用第一人稱及第三人稱形式.
高分句型:
1.It's popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air.它很受人們的歡迎,不僅是因為它的非常好的天氣,還有它的新鮮空氣.
not only…but also…不但,而且,連接前后兩個并列的成分;be popular with固定短語 受…歡迎;for介詞表原因;fantastic weather 意為"非常好的天氣".
2.It's necessary for us to protect the environment and we should live a low-carbon life.我們有必要保護環(huán)境,我們應(yīng)該過一種低碳生活.
此句運用了固定句式it+be+adj+for sb to do sth"對于某人做某事是…的",it為形式主語,動詞不定式為真正的主語;and連接前后兩個分句,表并列;live a low-carbon life過一種低碳生活,live a…life過一種…的生活.

解答 One possible version:
Hello!My name is Li Hua.I'm a middle school student.Welcome to my hometown-Qiannan.It lies in the south of Guizhou Province.There are many beautiful places,such as Xiaoqikong,Doupeng Hill and so on.It's popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air.【高分句型】It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms.What's more,it's famous for tea,such as Duyun Maojian,Guiding Yunwu,etc【介紹家鄉(xiāng)】
As a citizen in Qiannan,it's our duty to make our hometown better.I think we should be honest and kind.We are ready to help others.It's necessary for us to protect the environment and we should live a low-carbon life.【高分句型】【倡導(dǎo)】
In my opinion,if everyone tries his best to do something for our hometown,it will become more and more beautiful.【我的希望】
Thank you!

點評 這是一篇給材料作文,在寫作中要做到三審:體裁、時態(tài)、人稱;   三思:詞匯->短語->句式; 三查:要點、拼寫和語法、連貫.

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