Question

【題目】寫作

假如你是Li Ming，從你與筆友Max的多年了解中，以”My pen friend Max”為題向全校師生介紹他的情況(如下表)。

基本情況	Max一所男女混合學(xué)校的八年級學(xué)生，�；@球俱樂部成員之一
外貌	長腿…，戴著眼鏡(神氣)…
個(gè)性(舉例)	幽默感…，樂于助人…
興趣愛好	閑暇時(shí)喜歡自己修理裝飾東西，但常犯錯(cuò)。
學(xué)習(xí)生活	每門課程月考，學(xué)習(xí)語言樂趣大，堅(jiān)持用英語寫作，上學(xué)期學(xué)做三明治失敗。
煩惱	無足夠時(shí)間玩…，發(fā)現(xiàn)物理難學(xué)。
希望	有更多時(shí)間進(jìn)行…，每月去一次世界公園看…，選修一門DIY課程。

My penfriend Max

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Answer 1

【答案】

My pen friend Max

Max is a student of a mixed school of Eight Grade.He is a member of the school "All-star" club.He has long legs ,he runs very fast.He always wears glasses. He has a sense of humor.And he is ready to help others.His friends like him very much.He likes to decorate the things in your spare time, but he often makes mistakes.

Every course of the exam, learning language is fun,And he insists on writing in English.He failed to make a sandwich last term.He doesn’t have enough time to play.He finds it hard to learn physics.He hopes to have more time for drawing pictures.He wants to go to the world park once a month.And he wants to take a DIY course.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如He has a sense of humor.And he is ready to help others.His friends like him very much.He likes to decorate the things in your spare time, but he often makes mistakes.等等。