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16．春華秋實(shí)，梨園飄香．你決定邀請(qǐng)你校外教Peter共游梨園，享受采摘樂(lè)趣．請(qǐng)根據(jù)廣告信息在QQ上給Peter留言，向他介紹"中華梨園（Zhonghua Pear Village）"并發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．去"中華梨園"的理由；
2．時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，交通；
3．活動(dòng)安排．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)．
Hi!Peter，
Pears are ready to be picked．Here I've found a good place to taste and pick pears．It's called Zhonghua Pear Village．（介紹中華梨園的環(huán)境交通等）The environment in the Zhonghua Pear Village is nice and enjoyable．The hills there are green and the water there is clear and clean．The road to the village is wide and the traffic is convenient．It's easy to get there by bus or by car．（活動(dòng)安排）It's great fun to pick pears by yourself there and people can taste them for free．
（時(shí)間）The open time is from July 25th to August 31st．I'd like to know when you are free and I want to invite you to visit the village．I think we will enjoy ourselves．
Please write to me and tell me the time．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)的提綱作文．內(nèi)容邀請(qǐng)外教游梨園．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．去"中華梨園"的理由；
2．時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，交通；
3．活動(dòng)安排．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：
It's great  fun，I'd like to，I think we will等

解答 Hi!Peter，
         Pears are ready to be picked．Here I've found a good place to taste and pick pears．It's called Zhonghua Pear Village．（介紹中華梨園的環(huán)境交通等）The environment in the Zhonghua Pear Village is nice and enjoyable．The hills there are green and the water there is clear and clean．The road to the village is wide and the traffic is convenient．It's easy to get there by bus or by car．（活動(dòng)安排）It's great  fun to pick pears by yourself there and people can taste them for free．
（時(shí)間）The open time is from July 25th to August 31st．I'd like to know when you are free and I want to invite you to visit the village．I think we will enjoy ourselves．
        Please write to me and tell me the time．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)的提綱類(lèi)作文．考生需根據(jù)所給題目及要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)作文．可先從最基本的詞匯入手，然后組詞成句，考生需特別注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，使文章看起來(lái)?xiàng)l理更清晰，語(yǔ)句更連貫．