Question

5．熊熊是個(gè)很聰明的學(xué)生，住在射陽，但他有一些不好的習(xí)慣，請你根據(jù)下面表格提供的信息，用英文寫一篇短文，并針對他存在的一些問題提出合理的建議．
姓名熊 熊
班級七年級一班
外貌大眼睛、矮而胖，戴眼鏡
喜歡唱歌、聽音樂，喜歡吃漢堡，喝可樂
不喜歡不喜歡游泳、跑步，吃蔬菜
寒假打算放煙花，吃餃子，看舞獅，玩電腦游戲
建議至少兩條
具體要求：
1．不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整．
3．內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Xiong Xiong is a clever student．He lives in Sheyang．He studies in a middle School．He is in Class 1，Grade 7．He isn't tall but fat．He has big eyes．He wears glasses．
He likes singing and listening to music．He likes having snacks between meals，but he doesn't like eating vegetables．He likes hamburgers and coke．He also dislikes swimming and running．
He plans to play fireworks，eat dumplings，watch lion dance and play computer games．
I think he must change his lifestyle．He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health．He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think he must change his lifestyle我認(rèn)為他必須改變生活方式．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health他應(yīng)該多吃蔬菜因?yàn)閷�健康有好處�?br />because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Xiongxiong is a clever student．He lives in sheyang．He studies in a middle School．He is in Class 1，Grade 7．He isn't tall but fat．He has big eyes．He wears glasses．（基本信息和外貌）
He likes singing and listening to music．He likes having snacks between meals，but he doesn't like eating vegetables．He likes hamburgers and coke．He also dislikes swimming and running．（喜好）
He plans to play fireworks，eat dumplings，watch lion dance and play computer games．（寒假打算）
I think he must change his lifestyle【高分句型一】．He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health．He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time．（建議）

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來．動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．