Question

【題目】寫作
假如你是李明，你讀過(guò)或聽過(guò)龜兔賽跑的故事嗎？請(qǐng)你寫一下，把這個(gè)故事介紹給你的外國(guó)筆友托尼。
注意：1 句子要通順、連貫；
2 詞數(shù)：100左右；
3 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示：tortoise龜；have a race舉行賽跑；much faster快得多；catch up with sb.趕上某人；win贏；lose輸
Dear Tony,
I'll tell you a story.

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,
I'll tell you a story. One day, a rabbitand a tortoise decided to have a race. They both wanted to reach the end first.The rabbit thought that he could win the race easily because he could run much faster than the tortoise. The race started. The rabbit ran fast at first. The rabbit thought the tortoise could never catch up with him, so he decided tohave a rest under a tree. After the rest, he could not see the tortoise, so he thought that the tortoise could give up running. But to his surprise, the tortoisearrived much earlier than him. The rabbit lost the race. Isn't it interesting?
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】寫故事的要點(diǎn)：
1.合理分配情節(jié)
2.人物關(guān)系的合理設(shè)定
3.無(wú)論大事小事都要設(shè)定好原因和結(jié)果
4.情節(jié)不要死套，要合理運(yùn)用，并要符合人物的思想與行為
5.要注意細(xì)節(jié)部分，不要把該略的留，該祥的去掉
6.要讓人物有血有肉，更要讓故事給人感覺起來(lái)是真實(shí)的！
7.內(nèi)容要?jiǎng)?chuàng)新。就算題材很老土也要想辦法使故事變得生動(dòng)有趣。方法很多，比如在敘述方法上創(chuàng)新一下，或者從新的角度來(lái)分析故事，總之就是要有新的突破。