Question

目前三門(mén)正在積極創(chuàng)建文明城市，但還是有一些不文明現(xiàn)象發(fā)生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的圖片和文字內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文發(fā)表在你校英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站的論壇上。

1.簡(jiǎn)單描述圖中人物行為， 并簡(jiǎn)述你的看法。
2.發(fā)表你的文明倡議	1）遵守規(guī)則
	2）保護(hù)環(huán)境
	3）……（至少一條建議）

 
注意：1. 短文必須包括表格中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)校名、人名、地名等真實(shí)信息；
3. 80—100詞。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：obey（遵守）    get along well with
From the picture, we can see that a young man______________________________________
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Answer 1

One Possible Version:
From the picture, we can see that a young man is cutting in line while others are waiting in line. It makes other people angry. I think what the man does is wrong.
As middle school students, it’s our duty to behave well and try to make Sanmen more beautiful Firstly, we should obey the rules. Mind our behavior in public places like waiting in line. Secondly, everyone needs to protect the environment. It’s a bad habit to drop litter everywhere. What’s more, we should be polite to others and respect the old. If all of us get along well with each other, I believe Sanmen will become better and better.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句ture, we can see that……；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣等。序數(shù)詞的使用是本文看起來(lái)更加條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。