Question

同學(xué)們，在你們成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中，想到過(guò)母親的付出嗎？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇60—80詞左右的小短文，描述母親為你做的事和你的感受。以下提示詞僅供參考。

cook meals, wash clothes, read books to…, go hiking with…, happy, exciting

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

My mother is always the busiest in my family. She does a lot for me and my whole family. She does most of the housework, such as cooking meals, washing clothes and so on. When I was still a little child, she read stories to me every night before I went to sleep. And she often took me to parks, zoos and other places to have fun. I am thankful to her for everything she did. I love my mother. （ 80 words）

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題，由于是描述自己經(jīng)歷過(guò)的事情，故時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。