Question

2．假設你是Li Lei，就如何做一名合格的中學生寫一篇60-80字的發(fā)言稿，要點如下：
1）要早睡早起，保持身體健康，上課不要遲到．
2）應該和同學及老師相處融洽．
3）在家應該幫助父母做家務，在校應該努力學習．
4）要愛護環(huán)境，并且設法做些有用的事來保護環(huán)境．
5）寫一兩點你自己的看法．
參考詞匯：環(huán)境environment   設法 try      保護protect
Fellow students
I am Li Lei．Today I want to share my idea on how to be a qualified middle school student with everyone here．Hello，l'm Li lei，l'm a Middle school student，and l want to be a qualified student．So let me tell you what should l do to be it．
First，I should goto bed early and get up early，it is necessary to keep healthy．I should not be late for classs．
Second，I should get along well with classmates and teachers．
Third，I should help parents do housework at home and work hard at school
Fourth，Take care of the environment and try to do something useful to protect the environment．
In short（總之），if I follow these，I will be a qualified student．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一，
it is necessary to  keep healthy保持健康是必要的．這是it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型，對于…來說…是…的．  
高分句型二，
if I can do these things，I will be a qualified student如果我做到這些，我將是一個合格的學生．這是if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是含有將來時的句子，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 Hello，l'm Li lei，l'm a Middle school student，and l want to be a qualified student．So let me tell you what should l do to be it．
First，I should  go to bed early and get up early，it is necessary to  keep healthy【高分句型一，注意it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】，I should not  be late for classs．【要點一，要早睡早起，保持身體健康，上課不要遲到】
Second，I should  get along well with classmates and teachers．【要點二，應該和同學及老師相處融洽】
Third，I should   help parents do housework at home and work hard at school．【要點三，在家應該幫助父母做家務，在校應該努力學習】
Fourth，Take care of the environment and try to do something useful to protect the environment．【要點四，要愛護環(huán)境，并且設法做些有用的事來保護環(huán)境】
In short（總之），if I can do these things，I will be a qualified student【高分句型二，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】!【要點五，自己的看法】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯
關系，注意不要遺漏要點．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．