分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是談談你對網(wǎng)上購物的看法.時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時.人稱主要為第一、三人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點:
1.網(wǎng)上購物很流行,許多中小學生也都參與進去.
2.我的觀點(贊同/反對)
3.希望同學們購物時慎重,當心受騙.
常用到的重點短語:
be regarded as 被視作…
on the Internet 網(wǎng)絡上
of course 當然
leave behind 落后
what's worse 更糟糕的是
【高分句型】
1.Online shopping is becoming①so popular that you'll ②be regarded as a fool③if you don't know④how to shop on the Internet.
①so…that,如此…以致于,that引導的結果狀語從句.
②be regarded as 被視作…
③if引導的條件狀語從句.
④疑問詞+to do sth 作為know的賓語.
2.①What's worse,②spending your money on the Internet may be dangerous,③for there are many cheats on the Internet.
①what's worse 更糟糕的是.
②動名詞短語作主語,spend+時間+on sth 花錢做某事
③for因為,引導原因狀語從句.
解答 The Internet is playing a more and more important role in people's life.It greatly affects people's life in many-ways.Online shopping is one of the examples.Online shopping is becoming so popular that you'll be regarded as a fool if you don't know how to shop on the Internet.【高分句型】The middle school students,of course,wouldn't like to be left behind the fashion.(網(wǎng)上購物很流行,許多中小學生也都參與進去)
Though I can't say no to this,yet I think teens should keep calm when they find so many cheap things on the Internet.The quality of the things can't be promised behind the cheap price.What's worse,spending your money on the Internet may be dangerous,for there are many cheats on the Internet.【高分句型】So I do suggest all people should take great care while doing online shopping.(我的觀點以及希望同學們慎重)
點評 這是一篇提綱作文.考生在把握了文章的中心后,應在內(nèi)心構思一個基本的框架,并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型,以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容.盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容,避免使用無把握或偏、難句型.注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣
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