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   假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的増 加、刪除或修改。

   增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A ) 并在其下面寫 出該加的詞。

   刪除:把多余的詞用(\) 劃掉。

   修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

   注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

       2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

    Last Sunday afternoon,I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other,the world will become more beautiful.

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