Question

【題目】 根據(jù)所給情景，參考所給的提示詞語，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。要求文句通順，語法正確，意思完整。假如你是某地區(qū)的留守兒童，名叫王小華。很幸運得到重慶市王先生的資助，才得以繼續(xù)求學(xué)。于是在今年5月10日你給王先生發(fā)了一封e-mail，表示感謝。

內(nèi)容是：1. 收到了書和錢，在教師和同學(xué)們的幫助下學(xué)習(xí)成績提高很快；

2. 校長和老師都都很高興，父母對你滿意；

3. 下決心今后更加努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得更大的進(jìn)步；

4. 希望長大后像王先生一樣能幫助別人，做一個對社會有用的人。

提示詞：pleased, money and book, return to school, , make much progress, encourage, make up my mind,

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Mr.Wang,

I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help．Thank you so much.

I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. The headmaster and teachers are very happy. My parents are very satisfied with you. They often praise me and encourage me．But for your help, I might have left school and couldn't have got such a good education.

I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress．I hope I can be a useful person to the society when I grow up.And like Mr. Wang, he can help others.

Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Xiaohua

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，假如你是王小華，是某地區(qū)的留守兒童，很幸運得到重慶市王先生的資助，才得以繼續(xù)求學(xué)。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給王先生發(fā)了一封e-mail，表示感謝。首先要注意e-mail的格式，然后認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。