Question

Writing 2 (2015江蘇南京鼓樓區(qū))

    初中三年，你一定結識了許多同窗好友，他們中有的安靜沉 穩(wěn)，有的活潑開朗，有的品學兼優(yōu)，請你挑選一位你印象最深刻 的好朋友，以“The friend who has impressed me most” 為題寫一篇 英語短文，并涵蓋以下三個問題：

1. What is he/she like?

2. Why has he/she impressed you most? ( Give one or two examples. )

3. What do you want to say to him/her before graduating from junior high?

注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

      The friend who has impressed me most

    The friend who has impressed me most is 

Answer 1

Writing 2

[寫作提示]

1. 審題：

這是一篇記敘文。涉及時態(tài)較多，要正確使用。

2. 確定要點：

(1) 說出你印象最深刻的好朋友；

(2) 他/她的容貌、性格；

(3) 你們的相處；

(4) 舉1 一2個例子說明朋友對你的幫助；

(5) 你對朋友的感激之情；

(6) 你想對朋友說的心里話。

[參考范文]

    The friend who has impressed me most The friend who has impressed me most is Wang Gang. He is tall and strong.He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me. He is also helpful and helps me a lot. We often have a good time together.

    One Sunday last year,we went to climb Zijin Mountain together.I was so careless that I fell over on the way to the mountain. Wang Gang helped me all the way and finally sent me to the hospital. I was very grateful to him.

    We will graduate from junior high soon.I want to say,Wang Gang,you are my best friend.I will remember you forever. I hope your dream will come true soon."