Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你是Kelsey，剛來到大石橋，你的朋友Jane 很擔(dān)心你的新學(xué)校的生活，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提示信息給她發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴她你適應(yīng)了并且喜歡上了這里的學(xué)校生活。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.你每天7:50到校，上午有4節(jié)課；下午有三節(jié)課，4:30放學(xué)。

2.你最喜歡周四，因?yàn)橹芩挠心阕钕矚g的英語以及美術(shù)，但是你不喜歡數(shù)學(xué)課，因?yàn)樗�很難。

3.你在新學(xué)校有了一個(gè)好朋友Nick，他經(jīng)常在數(shù)學(xué)方面幫助你。

4.放學(xué)后，你經(jīng)常和Nick一起打籃球。

5.你的學(xué)校生活忙碌但是很有趣。

要求：① 句子通順，連貫，書寫工整。

②內(nèi)容不能遺漏，但是可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞。

③文中不要出現(xiàn)關(guān)于自己的真實(shí)信息，如真實(shí)姓名或班級(jí)，否則將扣除一定的

分?jǐn)?shù)。

郵件開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jane,

Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about(擔(dān)心) my new school life here. I’m fine here because I like my new school life.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Jane,

Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about(擔(dān)心) my new school life here. I’m fine here because I like my new school life.

Let me tell you something about my school life.I get to school at 7:50 every day. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. My classes are over at 4:30. I like Thursday, because I can have English and art on that day. English is my favorite subject. But I don’t like maths, because it is very difficult. I have a good friend in my new school. His name is Nick. He often helps me with maths. After school, I usually play basketball with Nick. My school life is busy but interesting.What about your school life?

Yours

Kelsey

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，Kelsey寫信給Jane，告訴她在新學(xué)校的生活。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I have ...， I like ...，His name is...，because it is...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要完整的表達(dá)出提綱中所列內(nèi)容。