Question

假如你是王潔，你在美國(guó)的筆友John Black想到中國(guó)旅行，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示給他發(fā)E—mail。
提示：1.北京是中國(guó)的首都，它歷史悠久，名勝古跡不勝枚舉，這里有萬(wàn)里長(zhǎng)城，故宮（the Imperial Palace），頤和園（the Summer Palace）等。夏秋是來(lái)北京的最佳時(shí)節(jié)；
2.夏季到大連、青島的海濱，沖浪是件樂(lè)事；
3.還可到海南，那里四季如春，你可以旅游、潛水，你一定會(huì)玩的很開(kāi)心；
4.發(fā)郵件日期12月10日.

Answer 1

Dear John,
I' ve heard from you. I know you want to visit China. That's a good idea. As you know Beijing is the capital of China. It has a
long history and there are many places of interest: the Great Wall,
Tian’anmen Square, the Great Hall of the People, the National Museum of China, the Forbidden City, Beihai Park and so on. Summer and autumn
is the best time to come here. You can go surfing in Dalian or
Qingdao, the waves there are terrific. You can also visit Hainan,
the weather is always warm, no matter in summer or in winter, there
you can go scuba diving. I think you'll have a good time.
I hope you'll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Wang Jie

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