Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1題，計(jì)15分）

假定你叫張華，最近從報(bào)紙上得知美國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，你班同學(xué)就建廠的利弊展開了熱烈的討論。討論后，決定由你給該公司寫封電子郵件，陳述你們對建廠的態(tài)度。

要點(diǎn)如下：

態(tài)度	歡迎	擔(dān)憂	希望
原因	有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等	造成環(huán)境污染等	了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息

注意：1．詞數(shù)80～100；

2．請不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；

3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am a middle school student．

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We’re looking forward to hearing from you．

Yours faithfully，

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.

Would you please offer us more information about it?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。動筆前一定要認(rèn)真要點(diǎn)，然后根據(jù)要點(diǎn)組織材料。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來時(shí)態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文就對建造工廠的利弊，陳述對建造工廠的態(tài)度。文章要點(diǎn)全，幾乎沒有語病錯(cuò)誤。能適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，文中使用一些好的句型如：I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown；I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.給文章增色不少。