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8．"安全，是最大的幸福"．作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)自我保護(hù)，遠(yuǎn)離危險(xiǎn)，減少傷害．請(qǐng)你從以下要點(diǎn)提示中選取至少四條，以"Always Be Careful"為題，寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的英語(yǔ)短文．文章開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．遵守交通規(guī)則（不闖紅燈、過(guò)馬路不聽(tīng)音樂(lè)）；
2．戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)發(fā)生意外時(shí)會(huì)急救；
3．下大雨時(shí)不要站在高處，遠(yuǎn)離大樹(shù)；
4．如遇火災(zāi)、要冷靜（打119、用濕布蓋住嘴巴、不要乘坐電梯）；
5．不要獨(dú)自下河游泳（發(fā)現(xiàn)有人溺水，要求救）；
6．其它方面（飲食、上網(wǎng)、交友安全…）
參考詞匯：布cloth （n．）、急救f(wàn)irst aid、溺水drown （v．）
Always Be Careful
As a middle school student，we should learn self-protection and stay away danger．Once we are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．For example，never listen to music while riding a bike．Besides always follow the traffic lights．
If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．When it rains，Don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．If we are indoors when the fire is on，we should be calm．At the same time，we can call 119 and cover our mouths with wet cloth．Be sure not to take a lift．Don't go swimming by ourselves．If someone is drowning，call for help．And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．If all these are kept in mind，we are sure to enjoy a much safer life．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)題干可知：這是一篇提綱作文．主要寫(xiě)中學(xué)生應(yīng)該注意安全的話(huà)題．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．遵守交通規(guī)則（不闖紅燈、過(guò)馬路不聽(tīng)音樂(lè)）；2．下大雨時(shí)不要站在高處，遠(yuǎn)離大樹(shù)；
3．如遇火災(zāi)、要冷靜（打119、用濕布蓋住嘴巴、不要乘坐電梯）；
4．不要獨(dú)自下河游泳（發(fā)現(xiàn)有人溺水，要求救）；
5．其它方面（飲食、上網(wǎng)安全…）
人稱(chēng)：第一人稱(chēng)為主；
時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主；
主要短語(yǔ)和句型：stay away from，遠(yuǎn)離…；
traffic rules，交通規(guī)則；
keep away from，遠(yuǎn)離…；
cover…with…，用…蓋住…；
take a lift，乘電梯；
pay attention to，注意…；
be sure to，一定會(huì)．
高分句型：
1．If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．
如果有人碰巧受傷，學(xué)會(huì)迅速急救．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，if，在此處意為"如果"，要遵循"主將從現(xiàn)原則"．
2．When it rains，don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．
When引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，When在此處意為"當(dāng)…時(shí)候"．
don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．否定祈使句．
3．And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的用法．情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should+動(dòng)詞原形．表示應(yīng)該做某事．pay attention to 注意…

解答 參考答案：
As a middle school student，we should learn self-protection and stay away from danger．
   Once we are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．For example，never listen to music while riding a bike．Besides always follow the traffic lights．（注意交通安全）
【高分句型1】If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．【高分句型2】When it rains，don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．（注意雨天安全）If we are indoors when the fire is on，we should be calm．At the same time，we can call 119 and cover our mouths with wet cloth．Be sure not to take a lift．（遇到火災(zāi)的情況）Don't go swimming by ourselves．If someone is drowning，call for help．（遇到溺水的情況）【高分句型3】And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．（飲食、上網(wǎng)安全）
   If all these are kept in mind，we are sure to enjoy a much safer life．

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