Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

My dream job

提示：將來(lái)想從事的工作是什么；為什么要從事這項(xiàng)工作；為了實(shí)現(xiàn)這一理想，你將怎么做。要求語(yǔ)言通順流暢，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不少于80詞。

My dream job

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream job

Everybody has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide.

Why do I want to be a tour guide? First of all, I'm an outgoing girl, and I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world. This may be great. What’s more, I like singing. Singing English songs is my favorite. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists. Their trip will be excellent.

Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then I’ll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a good tour guide in the future

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己將來(lái)的工作，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。