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4．假如你叫李華，你打算中考結(jié)束后和同學(xué)們結(jié)伴出游，但遭到了父母的反對．請結(jié)合此事，談?wù)勅绾螌Υ�父母及如何解決日常生活中與他們意見不一致的問題．
要求：（1）邏輯清晰，語言通順，觀點(diǎn)不限，自由發(fā)揮，無需標(biāo)題．
（2）文中不能以任何方式出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和縣（市）區(qū)名及其它相關(guān)信息．
（3）詞數(shù)：80-100．
參考詞匯：中考 the High School Entrance Examination．
In my opinion，we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much．Since we are not adults，we need to discuss things with our parents before we make decisions．But when we do so，we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think．What should we do？I think we should explain to them what we think and ask them for advice．
Take my experience for example：Last time I told my parents about my summer travel plan and they simply said"No"．I was really upset at first．But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety．So I talked to them later and made it clear that I would be safe together with my classmates．In the end，not only did they agree to my plan but also helped me prepare for the trip．
How nice it is that our parents and we can understand each other!．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much我們應(yīng)該愛和尊重我們的父母，因?yàn)樗麄儛酆驼疹櫸覀冞@么多．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因?yàn)椤��?br />高分句型二
But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety但后來我意識(shí)到，他們只是擔(dān)心我的安全．
這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I realized 是主句，后面的是賓語從句，注意時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該一致．

解答 In my opinion，we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much
【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】．Since we are not adults，we need to discuss things with our parents before we make decisions【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】．But when we do so，we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think．What should we do？I think we should explain to them what we think and ask them for advice．
Take my experience for example：Last time I told my parents about my summer travel plan and they simply said"No"．I was really upset at first．But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety
【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．So I talked to them later and made it clear that I would be safe together with my classmates．In the end，not only did they agree to my plan but also helped me prepare for the trip．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹如何對待父母及如何解決日常生活中與他們意見不一致的問題】
How nice it is that our parents and we can understand each other!【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．