Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下面一段文字，寫(xiě)一篇介紹David的文章。

1 David于2000年12月出生于丹陽(yáng)的一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)，屬龍，他從小喜愛(ài)打籃球并且籃球打得好。他性格活潑，精力充沛，愛(ài)參加各種活動(dòng)。他也很聰明，擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)理化。他是班上的尖子生之一，但他很謙虛，從不炫耀，樂(lè)于助人。他心地善良，常捐錢(qián)捐物給需要的人。他受媽媽影響最大，他媽媽教育他要有愛(ài)心。他喜愛(ài)紅色，認(rèn)為紅色使人易于采取行動(dòng)，也認(rèn)為紅色能給人帶來(lái)好運(yùn)。

2他愛(ài)玩電腦游戲，并在星期天玩兩個(gè)小時(shí)。他認(rèn)為他能平衡愛(ài)好和學(xué)習(xí)。

3他很自信，認(rèn)為他只要努力沒(méi)有做不成的事。去年他被選為初三（一）班的班長(zhǎng)。

4他夢(mèng)想當(dāng)一個(gè)像姚明一樣的偉大的籃球隊(duì)員。

詞數(shù)八十以上，可以發(fā)揮，但必須包含以上要點(diǎn)。

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Answer 1

【答案】

David was born in a small town, Danyang on December 2000.He was the dragon.When he was a child, he was fond of playing basketball and played basketball well. He is lively, and he loves to take part in activities. He is also very smart and good at math. He is one of the top students in the class, but he is very modest.He never shows off, and he is ready to help others. He is kind-hearted.He often donates money to people in need. He was affected by the mother, his mother taught him to love. He is fond of red.He thinks red can make a person easy to take action, and red can bring good luck.

He likes to play computer games, and he plays two hours on Sunday. He thinks he can balance the interests and learn.

He is very confident that he can try to do what he can do. Last year he was elected as the monitor of the class.He dreams of being a great basketball player like Yao Ming.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹David的情況，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如He often donates money to people in need. He was affected by the mother, his mother taught him to love. He is fond of red.He thinks red can make a person easy to take action, and red can bring good luck等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。