Question

【題目】要點(diǎn)：1、Who is the person ? And describe him or her.

2、How did the person help you?

3、How has this person changed your life?

要求：內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。（詞數(shù)不少于80詞）

Answer 1

【答案】On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I’m in trouble. Among them, the most important one is my grandma.My grandmother is my favorite person. she is in her early seventies, with a head of gray hair.

In my early years, my parents left home because of their work. So I lived with my grandma until eleven years old. During those days, it was my grandma who looked after me. She also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life. She is a Chinese teacher, so owing to her help my writing skill is better than most students in my class. I really feel proud of my grandma.

I will certainly set aside as much time as possible to keep her company so that she will not feel lonely. I wish my grandma will live a happy old-age life.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我最喜歡的人。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，the most important one is……，she is……，She also taught me……，I wish……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我最喜歡的人是我的祖母，接下來(lái)介紹我的祖母如何幫助我，如何改變我的生活，最后我希望我的祖母有一個(gè)幸福的晚年生活。此處care about, in trouble, live with, look after, contribute to, owing to, feel proud of, set aside, as…..as possible, live a……life等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。