Question

【題目】書面表達（20分）

假如你是Jimmy, 你的朋友Tom想知道關于體育考試的情況。請你寫信向他介紹一些關于剛剛過去的體育考試的情況，并給他一些如何通過考試的建議，字數(shù)100左右。開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給你寫好，下面信息供你參考，請合理運用并適當發(fā)揮：

體育考試很重要。它包括長跑（long- distance running）、跳繩（rope skipping）、打排球以及跳遠（long jump）等等。起初，你們遇到種種問題：有人跑不到終點就累倒在地，還有人根本不知道怎么打排球。

為了通過考試，你建議他：

1. 每天練習長跑。可以每天跑遠一點，每次比前一次快一點，這樣可以----

2. 每節(jié)課練習打排球，不能取得好成績的時候，可以-----

3. 鍛煉很重要，但是也要保護好自己免受傷害。

4. 考試前要充分休息，適當飲水，少吃含有脂肪的食物。心情要----

Dear Tom,

Let me tell you something about the PE exam. ___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Wish you good luck!

Yours

Jimmy

Answer 1

【答案】

Let me tell you something about the PE exam. The exam is very important. It includes the long-distance running, rope skipping, playing volleyball and the long jump. At first, we had many problems. Some of us were so tired that they lay on the ground before reaching the finishing line, and some didn’t know how to play volleyball at all.

Here are some suggestions for you to pass the exam. First, you can practise the long-distance running every day. Run a little farther and faster every day, then you can make progress little by little. Second, practise playing volleyball in every PE class. If you can not play very well, teachers will teach you some skills.

Training is important, but don’t forget to protect yourselves. Before the exam, you need to rest enough, drink some water, eat less food with fat. And you should also keep yourself in a good mood.

Wish you good luck!

Yours

Jimmy

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求按所給的提綱，介紹一些關于剛剛過去的體育考試的情況，并給他一些如何通過考試的建議。要求仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。本文分為兩部分，一是過去的體考情況，用一般過去時態(tài)；二是對考試的建議，用一般現(xiàn)在時，情態(tài)動詞，祈使句等等。

寫作亮點：本范文條理清晰，層次分明，敘述清楚：全文主要內(nèi)容分3個自然段，第一自然段寫體考；第二自然段也建議；第三自然段寫注意事項。每一自然段開頭都寫了一個總寫的句子，像第一自然段的：Let me tell you something about the PE exam.第二自然段的Here are some suggestions for you to pass the exam. 同時，文中所有的first, second…，更使得本文結構層次井然。