Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（10分）

假設(shè)你叫Bill, 你的父母給你選了許多課外活動，但有些是你不喜歡的，你打算如何向他們講清楚卻又不傷害他們呢？請你給父母寫一封80詞左右的信，信中要包括以下內(nèi)容：

（1）你為什么不喜歡他們給你選的課外活動；

（2）你對父母為你選課外輔導(dǎo)班的看法；你對父母的要求或希望；

（3）告訴父母你能夠在輕松，快樂中學(xué)習(xí)，成長，并能取的好成績，父母不用擔(dān)心。

可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意語句通順，行文連貫。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Dad and Mom,

Thanks a lot for your great love for me.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Dad and Mum,

Thanks a lot for you great love on me. I understand that you are trying hard to make me become a versatile person by choosing lots of extra-curricular activities for me. However, in fact, I doesn't enjoy them. I have a piano class on Monday, a dancing class on Wednesday and a drawing class on Friday.Actually, I am interested in Sports but not Music. I want to join the other kind of extra-curricular activities like kickboxing, table tennis, and so on. Hope that I can spend my time for my own interests. Thank you very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹你的父母給你選了許多課外活動，但有些是你不喜歡的，你打算向他們講清楚卻又不傷害他們。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文要點(diǎn)全，能將主要內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚，沒有語言錯誤。適當(dāng)?shù)膽?yīng)用連詞，例如However, in fact, but not使短文更條理。