Question

1．假如你叫Paul，是第一中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生，今年夏天即將畢業(yè)．初中三年你變化很大，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，記錄自己的成長過程，并談?wù)勀愕氖罴儆媱潱?br />

過去	1．性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話． 2．對學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣，成績不好． 3．不愛運(yùn)動，沉迷電腦游戲．
現(xiàn)在	1．樂于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好． 2．各科成績優(yōu)異，…（舉一例） 3．積極參加各類活動，…（舉一例）
暑假計劃	…（一至兩點(diǎn)）

要求：1）詞數(shù)100左右，文章開頭已給，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2）短文需包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3）字跡工整，條理清楚，行文連貫．
4）文中請勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校．
I'm Paul，a Grade 9student in No.1Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是記錄自己的成長過程，并談?wù)勀愕氖罴儆媱潱畷r態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1過去1）．性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話．2）．對學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣，成績不好．3）．不愛運(yùn)動，沉迷電腦游戲．
2現(xiàn)在：1）．樂于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好．2）．各科成績優(yōu)異，…（舉一例）3）．積極參加各類活動，…（舉一例）
3暑假計劃
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
be interested in 感興趣
be weak in 在…薄弱
what's more 再者
be crazy about  對…著迷
get along with  與…相處
take a part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能．
2．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．
3．I'll ①help my parents do some housework and do more reading ②to improve myself．
①help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
②動詞不定式做目的狀語．

解答 I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
      In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型】（性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（對學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣，成績不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不愛運(yùn)動，沉迷電腦游戲）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（樂于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型】（各科成績優(yōu)異）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（積極參加各類活動）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．【高分句型】（暑假計劃）

點(diǎn)評 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡潔明了，寫作時也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時，要特別注意幾種時態(tài)的運(yùn)用，說到過去用一般過去時，現(xiàn)在的狀況用一般現(xiàn)在時，將來的計劃用一般將來時，不要混淆，不能逐句翻譯，同時要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．