【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

Tom你的好朋友,你現(xiàn)在給大家介紹一下他一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞。

你必須包含如下內(nèi)容：

早上6:40起床，7點(diǎn)坐公共汽車(chē)上學(xué)，每天上午上5節(jié)課，12:10吃中飯，每天打籃球一小時(shí)，下午5:40放學(xué)回家，他每天花一小時(shí)做家庭作業(yè)，晚上9:30洗澡后上床睡覺(jué)。

注意： 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Tom’s Day

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【答案】

Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my good friend Tom. He often gets up at 6:40 in the morning.Then he brush his teeth. After he has breakfast, he goes to school by bus. Classes begin at 8. He has five classes in the morning. He has lunch at 12:10. He likes playing basketball. He plays it for one hour every day. After school he goes home at 5:40. It takes him one hour to do his homework. He has a shower in the evening. Then at 9:30, he goes to bed.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們介紹好朋友Tom的日常生活，題目中包括以下幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：起床、上學(xué)、課程、午飯、打籃球、回家、寫(xiě)作業(yè)、上床睡覺(jué)。短文描述了Tom一天的生活，因此寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，應(yīng)按照時(shí)間順序，這樣使文章比較有條理。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇作文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式，因此應(yīng)特別注意每句話(huà)中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化，這是一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。同時(shí)，文章中還應(yīng)使用一些連詞，使文意連貫。注意英語(yǔ)中時(shí)間的表達(dá)，正確書(shū)寫(xiě)單詞，主語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范。另外，還可以使用一些好的句型和短語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)流暢。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文的作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的朋友Tom的日常生活。短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題干中的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。作者寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，按照從上午到晚上的時(shí)間順序，非常有條理。短文中也使用了正確的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，尤其是注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式的變化，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確。短文單詞書(shū)寫(xiě)正確，語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用得當(dāng)。文章中還有一些連詞的使用，使文意連貫。短文中較好的句型有After he has breakfast, he goes to school by bus、He likes playing basketball. He plays it for one hour every day、After school he goes home at 5:40、It takes him one hour to do his homework等。

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