Question

根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，按要求寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的真實(shí)姓名。
假如你是李磊，你的筆友Tom想來(lái)北京旅游，請(qǐng)你給他提一些建議。如：時(shí)間、活動(dòng)安排等，并給出原因。
提示詞語(yǔ)：the best time, warm, do some sightseeing
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to know that you want to visit Beijing. __________________________________
Yours,
Li Lei

Answer 1

Dear Tom
I’m happy to know that you want to visit Beijing. Here is some advice for you.
I think the best time to come is in spring because it’s neither too hot nor too cold. Why not do some sightseeing such as visiting Bei Hai Park and the Summer Palace? They are famous. And you’d better take a camera because you may want to take some photos.
There are lots of people visiting Beijing in spring, so it’s a good idea to book your hotel online before coming. The most comfortable way to travel in Beijing is by taxi, but it is the most expensive one.
I hope my advice will be helpful. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing soon.
Yours,
Li Lei

試題分析：這是一篇根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)一篇書(shū)信給筆友Tom提建議來(lái)北京旅游的時(shí)間和安排。文中必須用到提示詞the best time, warm, do some sightseeing以第一人稱(chēng)的形式來(lái)寫(xiě)，注意書(shū)信的稱(chēng)呼和結(jié)束語(yǔ)，要把時(shí)間和安排交代清，注意一些固定搭配和詞組，考查了學(xué)生的綜合能力。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章構(gòu)思新穎，內(nèi)容包括面很全，語(yǔ)言組織力很強(qiáng)，切中題意，文中出現(xiàn)了一些好的句型如：I’m happy to know that，he best time to come is in spring because it’s neither too hot nor too cold.，you’d better take a camera ， it’s a good idea to book your hotel online before coming. 使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。