Question

最近你結(jié)識了一位新筆友，請根據(jù)以下信息，簡單介紹一下你的新筆友。要求不少于50詞。
名字：David  年齡：13 國籍：加拿大   居住地：多倫多 ( Toronto )    
語言：英語和法語 喜歡的動物：考拉，因為很可愛 .長頸鹿，因為對人很友好 。 
喜歡的天氣：晴天和雪天。
愛好：看報紙，雜志，攝影，彈鋼琴。    夢想：做一名記者（說出原因）

Answer 1

I am glad that I have a new pen pal. His name is David. He is a lovely boy. He comes from Canada. And now he lives in Toronto. He speaks English and French. His favorite animals are koalas and giraffes, because koalas are very cute. and giraffes are very friendly to people. He enjoys sunny days and snowy days, because she loves sunshine and snow. In his free time, he likes reading magazines and newspapers. He also likes taking photos and playing the guitar. He wants to be a reporter when he is older, because he thinks it is an interesting job. A reporter is very busy but he likes working with different kinds of people.
I like David very much and I hope his dream will come true!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹一個新筆友。本文做給材料比較詳細(xì)，動筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱應(yīng)該是第三人稱。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達(dá)的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯。
點評：在寫書面表達(dá)是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動詞的英語，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。