Question

【題目】假如你是Alice, 你想寫一封推薦信，推薦你的同學(xué)Daniel獲得今年的新星獎(jiǎng)。推薦

信字?jǐn)?shù)為100詞左右。開頭，結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Excellent qualities （優(yōu)秀的品質(zhì)）	Good examples （好的事例）
樂于助人	1.經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)做家庭作業(yè)。 2.經(jīng)常與同學(xué)們一起打掃公園。 3.在公交車上……（至少一點(diǎn)）
聰明	1．學(xué)東西快，學(xué)好所有的學(xué)科，計(jì)劃好所有的事情。 2．當(dāng)我們?nèi)ヒ盃I時(shí)他會(huì)搭建帳篷。
勇敢	一個(gè)周日的早晨，一個(gè)小女孩掉到湖里，他跳進(jìn)湖里，把小女孩從水里救了上來，最后并送她回家。
有禮貌	經(jīng)常向老師問好，經(jīng)常幫老師擦黑板。

Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. ________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

He is clever._________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

He is brave, too._____________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

He is polite.__________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his classmates with their homework. He often cleans up the park with his classmates. He always gives his seat to someone/others on the bus(in need).

He is very clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard at all his subjects.(He is good at all his subjects.)He plans everything well. He can put up a tent when we go camping.

He is brave, too. One Sunday morning a girl fell into the lake. He jumped into the lake and saved her from the water. At last he sent/took her to her home.

Daniel is polite .He often says “hello” to the teacher. He often helps the teacher to clean the blackboard.

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容推薦Daniel獲得今年的新星獎(jiǎng)，內(nèi)容包括表格內(nèi)所有的信息。根據(jù)對(duì)題目的分析可知，書信要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來陳述，并采用第三人稱來寫作。為了使行文流暢、上下文銜接自然，寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用連接詞或過渡語言，使文章有一定的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；要靈活運(yùn)用自己熟悉的高級(jí)詞句，以提高文章的檔次。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。