Question

假如你是劉嵐，Linda是兩年前就讀你學(xué)校的交換生，昨天你收到了她的電子郵件。請根據(jù)下面的郵件及提示內(nèi)容，紿她回一封郵件。

Dear Liu Lan,

Long time no see! How is everything going? I miss you very much. I think you must be more beautiful now. Write and tell me what you look like now.

Yours,

Linda

提示：1. 比以前長高了，更健康了。

2. 看電視、玩電腦的時間少了，學(xué)習(xí)的時間多了。

3. 性格變得外向了，交了很多朋友。

要求：l. 語句通順，語意連貫。 2. 用上所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3. 郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 4. 70詞左右。

Dear Linda,

Long time no see! I also miss you very much.

 

 

Come to visit me if you are free.

Yours,

Liu Lan

 

Answer 1

Dear Linda,

Long time no see! I also miss you very much. I am very glad to receive you letter and I am willing to tell you some changes on me. Now I am much higher than before and I am much healthier. I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games, but now I have changed a lot. I prefer to spend time on my study. At the same time, I have been more outgoing and easygoing. I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them. I am so happy that I have changed so many!

Come to visit me if you are free.

Yours,

Liu Lan

【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進行恰當(dāng)?shù)氖潞希�更能加強作品的可讀性。

【亮點說明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

考點：提綱作文。