Question

【題目】近日，教育部鼓勵中小學Wi-Fi無線網(wǎng)絡覆蓋校園。有的學生認為這是時代的進步，但有的學生認為這會影響他們的學習。為此，教育部對各地學校的學生進行了調(diào)查。請根據(jù)以下學生的看法和你自己的觀點，寫一篇作文。

參考要點：

1.支持者：獲取信息更方便，獨立解決問題；

2.反對者：浪費太多的時間，受到網(wǎng)絡上不良的影響；

3. 你自己的觀點。

要求：

1. 要點齊全

2. 詞數(shù)：80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

With the development of Internet, almost every developed area in China is covered with Wi-Fi. Should our schools be covered with Wi-Fi?

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Answer 1

【答案】With the development of Internet, almost every developed area in China is covered with Wi-Fi. Should our schools be covered with Wi-Fi? Different students have different ideas.

In fact, most of the students support this idea. They think it will be more convenient to get some information. With its help, they can almost solve the problems they meet at any time in school instead of asking others for help.

However, some students who disagree also have their points. First of all, they think it is a waste of time. Besides, maybe something on the Internet will have a bad influence on some students who can’t control themselves well.

As for me, I think our school shouldn’t be covered with Wi-Fi. If it is really around us all the time, it will cause some students lose interest in study and spend lots of time surfing the Internet. As a result, they will fail in exams or it will even destroy their whole life.

All in all, Internet helps people make progress in many fields in our daily life, but if students can’t control themselves well, it may turn their life into a terrible situation.

【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了大量短語，例如with the development of Internet，be covered with，in fact，most of，be more convenient，at any time，in school，instead of ask for help，first of all，as for me，all the time，spend lots of time doing，as a result，all in all等。而They think it will be more convenient to get some information./ Besides, maybe something on the Internet will have a bad influence on some students who can’t control themselves well./ As a result, they will fail in exams or it will even destroy their whole life.等復雜從句結構的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是短文的最大亮點。