Question

10．假如你是李東，你們學(xué)校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆主席，你想?yún)⑦x．請按以下提示，寫一篇競選演講稿．

個(gè)人優(yōu)勢	性格、特長…
學(xué)習(xí)方法	英語歌曲、電影…
活動(dòng)設(shè)想	英語晚會(huì)、演講比賽、才藝展示
當(dāng)選愿望	…

要求：（1）詞數(shù)控制在80～100，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名；
（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Good afternoon，my dear friends!
My name is Li Dong．I want to run for the new president of the English club．
I'm a person who is outgoing，active and easy to get on with．I like to help others．And I have the ability to deal with difficulties．I'm good at English，especially spoken English．I often learn English by watching English movies，listening to English songs and reading different kinds of English books．
I have some new ideas about the club's activities，such as holding evening parties or organizing English talent shows to make our school life more colorful．We can also hold some English speech contests to improve our English．
I really hope to be the president of the club．If you choose me，I will be active，creative and serve you well．Please give me a chance!
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm a person who is outgoing，active and easy to get on with我是一個(gè)外向，活潑，易相處的人．
who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾person．
【高分句型二】
If you choose me，I will be active，creative and serve you well如果你選擇我，我會(huì)很活躍，有創(chuàng)造力，為你們服務(wù)．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的原則．

解答 Good afternoon，my dear friends!
My name is Li Dong．I want to run for the new president of the English club．I'm a person who is outgoing，active and easy to get on with．【高分句型一】I like to help others．And I have the ability to deal with difficulties．（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢）I'm good at English，especially spoken English．I often learn English by watching English movies，listening to English songs and reading different kinds of English books．（學(xué)習(xí)方法）
I have some new ideas about the club's activities，such as holding evening parties or organizing English talent shows to make our school life more colorful．We can also hold some English speech contests to improve our English．（活動(dòng)設(shè)想）
I really hope to be the president of the club．If you choose me，I will be active，creative and serve you well．【高分句型二】Please give me a chance!（當(dāng)選愿望）
That's all．Thank you!

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