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【題目】書面表達(dá) 12分

我們應(yīng)該從不同角度看待一個(gè)問(wèn)題，權(quán)衡事物的利弊�，F(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來(lái)越發(fā)達(dá)，“中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的利弊”

已成為人們討論的焦點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)以此為話題，根據(jù)提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

利：課后放松；輔助學(xué)習(xí)；傳遞信息快，開拓視野，網(wǎng)絡(luò)交流。

弊：長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)有害健康；沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)，不思學(xué)習(xí)；不良網(wǎng)站，誤導(dǎo)學(xué)生進(jìn)入虛擬空間，真假難辨。

Answer 1

【答案】

Today the Internet develops more and more quickly.People have different opinions on the influence to students.

Some people think the Internet is good for the students. The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax. They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet. They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet. It makes the students learn more in the world. What's more, the students can make friends and chat with each other on the Internet. This can help them grow up better.

However, some people think the Internet is bad for the students. They think the children spend too much time on it and it's bad for their health.If the children always play it, they don't want to study any more. Some bad websites lead the students to know the bad things. Besides, the Internet is not true. The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為話題類作文，要求根據(jù)提示以中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的利弊為話題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶?/span>。寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必把各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應(yīng)用了很多短語(yǔ)使得文章很生動(dòng)，例如Some people think the Internet is good for the students. The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax. They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet.句式The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong.的應(yīng)用更使得短文表述更準(zhǔn)確。總之，該文是一篇不錯(cuò)的短文。