Question

假如你有一只寵物狗Dongdong.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表介紹一下你的寵物狗。

年齡	性格	作息時(shí)間	能力	關(guān)系
2	聰明，友好， 但有時(shí)懶惰	6：20起床 8:45睡覺(jué)	會(huì)立著行走 會(huì)跳舞 會(huì)和我一起看電影	放學(xué)回家時(shí)它跟我玩，當(dāng)我有空時(shí)，去遛狗

I have a pet dog. Its name is Dongdong.____________________________________________
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Answer 1

I have a pet dog. Its name is Dong.dong. It’s two. It is friendly and smart. But sometimes it is kind of lazy. It gets up at six twenty and goes to bed at a quarter to nine. It can walk on two legs. It can dance. It can also watch TV with me. When I get home from school, it plays with me. When I am free, I take a walk with my pet dog. We are good friends.

解析試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作重在對(duì)所列信息的表達(dá)到位。首先用簡(jiǎn)單的句式表達(dá)它的名詞，年齡，說(shuō)明它是友好的、聰明的Its name is Dongdong. It’s two. It is friendly and smart.有時(shí)它有點(diǎn)懶sometimes it is kind of lazy.起床用gets up表達(dá)，在8:45睡覺(jué)用goes to bed at a quarter to nine.表達(dá)。然后表達(dá)它能直立行走walk on two legs，會(huì)跳舞can dance和我一起看電影watch movies with me.與我玩耍it plays with me，去遛狗take a walk with my pet dog.最后總結(jié)我們是好朋友We are good friends.
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫(xiě)作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于初一的作文，不要求有很華美的詞語(yǔ)，重在培養(yǎng)自己連詞成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫(xiě)，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。