Question

14．良好的生活習慣對我們的成長非常重要．你認為良好的生活習慣應當是怎樣的？請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮．
提示：1．吃得好，才能有健康的身體．
2．必須吃早餐，給身體提供能量．
3．飲食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身體好．
5．參加體育鍛煉，強身健體．
I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．We must also have the right kind of food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．Exercise will keep us active and strong．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)劻己玫纳�活習慣應當是怎樣的．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．吃得好，才能有健康的身體．
2．必須吃早餐，給身體提供能量．
3．飲食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身體好．
5．參加體育鍛煉，強身健體．
常用到的重點短語：
keep healthy 保持健康
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
forget to do sth 忘記去做某事
go to bed 上床睡覺
get up 起床
stay up 熬夜
be bad for對…不利

【高分句型】
1．①Staying up late at night②is bad for our health．
①動名詞短語做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)is．
②be bad for對…不利
2．①Of course，②it's necessary for us to take exercise．
①of course 當然
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．（吃得好，才能有健康的身體）Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．（必須吃早餐，給身體提供能量）We must also have the right kind of food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．（飲食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品）Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．【高分句型】（早睡早起身體好）Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．【高分句型】Exercise will keep us active and strong．（參加體育鍛煉，強身健體．）

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點提示運用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．