Question

8．最近二十一世紀(jì)學(xué)生英文報（21st Century Teens）"你說我說"欄目就"初中畢業(yè)后是否應(yīng)該出國留學(xué)"這一話題進(jìn)行了討論．請根據(jù)提示，以"Study Abroad or Study in China？"為題，寫一篇短文參與該欄目的討論．

要求：1表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2必須包括所有提供信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3詞數(shù)：100左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Study Abroad or Study in China？
In recent years，more and more students go abroad for further study after graduating from junior middle school．In our school we had a discussion on whether students should go abroad at that early age．
                               

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法．
高分句型：
①It is also a good chance for them to learn a foreign culture．這也是他們學(xué)習(xí)外國文化的好機(jī)會．句子中It is a good chance for sb to do sth對某人來說是做某事的好機(jī)會．
②As for me，I would like to go further study abroad．至于我，我想出國留學(xué)．句子考查would like to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語．

解答 Study Abroad or Study in China？
In recent years，more and more students go abroad for further study after graduating from junior middle school．In our school we had a discussion on whether students should go abroad at that early age．（引出話題）
Some students hold the opinion that it can provide better study conditions．They can make rapid progress in their foreign language study．It is also a good chance for them to learn a foreign culture（高分句型）．（一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為出國學(xué)習(xí)有好處）
However，other students hold the opposite opinion．They think they are too young to take care of themselves．Moreover，studying abroad can cost a lot．（一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為出國學(xué)習(xí)花費(fèi)太大）
As for me，I would like to go further study abroad（高分句型）．Studying abroad is challenging，but we should learn to depend on ourselves．We can see wonderful outside world as well．When I come back to China，I can make a great contribution to my country．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練．開頭介紹了出國學(xué)習(xí)深造的一些現(xiàn)象，接下來就這一話題進(jìn)行討論，最后說出自己的想法，As for me，I would like to go further study abroad．Studying abroad is challenging，but we should learn to depend on ourselves．When I come back to China，I can make a great contribution to my country．寫出了自己的愛國之心．