Question

6．作為一名中學生，要理解父母的辛苦勞作，要力所能及地幫助父母干一些家務活，以減輕父母的負擔，請根據(jù)提示以"Help My Parents"為標題寫一篇文章，提示包括：
1、我有一個幸福的家庭，爸爸媽媽工作很辛苦，所以我經(jīng)常幫助父母干家務．
2、早晨起床后整理床鋪、打掃房間、掃地．
3、早餐后刷碗，然后去上學．
4、下午放學回家后幫助媽媽做晚飯、打掃客廳、倒垃圾，之后完成學習任務．
5、周末洗衣服、疊衣服、幫助爸爸洗車、澆花．
6、參考詞匯：help my parents，do chores，make the bed，sweep the floor，do the dishes，take out the trash，fold the clothes，clean the car，water the flowers
Help My Parents                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 In the afternoon，when I get back home from school，I usually help my mom cook dinner．     下午，放學回家后，我經(jīng)常幫媽媽做飯．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．
高分句型二
 My parents often say I am hard-working．  我父母常說我很勤勞．這是一個賓語從句，My parents often say 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 Help My Parents
    I have a happy family．My parents work very hard．They want to make more money for our family．As a student，I should study hard and help my parents．So I often do many chores to help my mom and dad．【開頭點明主題】
    In the morning，I make the bed after I get up every day．Next I clean the room and sweep the floor．After breakfast I help my mom do the dishes．Then I go to school．In the afternoon，when I get back home from school，I usually help my mom cook dinner【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．After dinner，I clean the living room and take out the trash．Then I do homework and watch TV．On weekends，I often do the laundry and fold the clothes for my family．Sometimes I help my father clean the car and water the flowers．【正文部分詳細介紹自己怎么幫助父母做家務】
    My parents often say I am hard-working【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．I am glad to hear．【結尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．